Hey Bruce, excellent topo. Two little things: First, I remember the start of pitch 2 as a chimney for the first 15 feet or so. And second, the moves just before and after the bolt on pitch 3 seemed cruxy for me. Perhaps some indication of that would be helpful. If you're ever down in JT again it'd be great to see you!
We didn't go into the chimney on P2, rather followed the guidebook descriptions and face climbed right up to the splitter crack. Topo reflects what Nurse Ratchet and I did, & corresponds to most all the written descriptions I've seen (although there are indeed many ways to go on P2)
Absolutely you're right regarding the cruxy area around the bolt on P3. New update of topo reflects this, as well as the right-facing nature of the crack above.
Hope to get down to J Tree sometime this winter, maybe...